Bring in a fresh eye (an outside reader, be it an editor or someone down the hall) for a new look at what you have written. You'll be surprised at the mistakes that had passed your notice since you were so involved with the initial writing!
USO Annual Report
Client:
WilliamsWhittle for USO Assignment: Write content for the 2008 annual report
Excerpt: More forward deployed troops are serving our country than at any time since Vietnam, many in the most remote areas of Iraq and Afghanistan. The USO mission is to reach these service men and women remains constant, but new battle realities require a different approach."
Comment: For those of us who equated the USO with the entertainers of times past, this report, with the images as much as the words, captures the work of a great organization.
